New newsletter checkbox copy at Showpo: +175.52% sign-ups

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Rewriting the newsletter checkbox copy at Showpo lifted newsletter sign-ups by 175.52% on the sign-in page and 146.78% on the checkout page.

Wingify Services ran this test for the fashion retailer Showpo, and it was published as a VWO case study.

The winning line teased exclusive content instead of simply asking people to join.

+175.52% sign-ups
  • Newsletter sign-ups on the sign-in page: +175.52% for variation 1.
  • Newsletter sign-ups on the checkout page: +146.78% for variation 1.
  • The case study does not report how variation 2 performed.
  • The metric is email sign-ups, not sales.

The change

Control (A)
header
Contact details
Checkbox: Join our NewsletterREPLACED
Shipping address
order summary
Checkout
Variant (B)
header
Contact details
Checkbox: exclusive teaser copyNEW
Shipping address
order summary
Checkout

Only the newsletter checkbox label changes, from a plain ask to an exclusive teaser.

Simplified mockup drawn by LiftArchive from the shared screenshots.

Control

The newsletter checkbox on the sign-in and checkout pages read "Join our Newsletter."

Variant

Variation 1, the winner, read "We wouldn't say EXCLUSIVE if we didn't mean it! Join our newsletter to find out." A second variation offered exclusive discounts and new styles.

Why it likely won

Our reading of the result, not the practitioner's claim.

  • "Join our Newsletter" gives no reason to tick the box. The new line hints at something worth having.
  • The playful tone and the word EXCLUSIVE create curiosity about what subscribers get.
  • The checkbox sits on pages people already use, so even small copy changes reach many visitors.

Caveats: The metric is newsletter sign-ups, not revenue, and no sample size, duration or confidence level was shared. Results are vendor-reported.

Who ran it

VWO ran this test for Showpo and published the results (VWO case study). The numbers are theirs; the summary and commentary on this page are ours.

Read the original case study on VWO →

How to run this test on your store

Hypothesis
If we replace a plain newsletter checkbox label with copy that hints at an exclusive benefit, then more shoppers will opt in because they see a reason to subscribe.
Primary metric
Newsletter opt-in rate on the page
Guardrails
  • Checkout completion rate
  • Email unsubscribe rate in the first 30 days
  • Email revenue per subscriber
Who should test it
Stores with a newsletter opt-in on sign-in or checkout pages and a plain label. It works best if you really do send exclusive offers, since a broken promise will show up in unsubscribes.

Questions

What should a newsletter checkbox say?

Give a reason to subscribe, such as exclusive offers or early access.

A plain "Join our newsletter" gives shoppers nothing to want.

Does adding a newsletter opt-in at checkout hurt sales?

An optional checkbox usually adds little friction, but watch checkout completion as a guardrail when you change it.

Are newsletter sign-ups a good test metric?

They are a fine leading metric, but check later that new subscribers open emails and buy, not just that they ticked the box.

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