Urgent subheadline on CareChoice's lead form won both steps

WinnerLanding page

A more urgent subheadline, telling visitors something was waiting for them, won an A/B test on CareChoice's two-step lead form.

KlientBoost ran the test and shared it on the KlientBoost blog, citing roughly 34% step-1 and 34.04% step-2 conversion.

The original's rates appear only in screenshots, so the size of the lift was not shared in text.

Winner
  • The urgent subheadline was named the winning variant.
  • Conversion rates cited: almost 34% on step 1 and 34.04% on step 2.
  • The control's rates and the relative lift were not shared in the article text.
  • No sample size or significance figures were shared.

The change

Control (A)
header
hero
Original subheadlineREPLACED
Step 2
Shop now
Variant (B)
header
hero
Urgent 'waiting' subheadlineNEW
Step 2
Shop now

Only the subheadline changes, to say something is waiting for the visitor.

Simplified mockup drawn by LiftArchive from the shared screenshots.

Control

CareChoice's original two-step landing page, which already used dynamic keyword insertion, with its original subheadline.

Variant

The same page with a subheadline that added urgency by suggesting something was 'waiting' for the visitor.

Why it likely won

Our reading of the result, not the practitioner's claim.

  • Telling people something is waiting makes the next step feel like collecting, not filling in a form.
  • Care services are often urgent for families, so a prompt to act now fits their state of mind.
  • Dynamic keyword insertion already made the page feel relevant, so the subheadline built on a strong base.

Caveats: The size of the lift was not stated in text, and the page also used dynamic keyword insertion. No sample size or significance was shared. Published on the KlientBoost blog around late 2017, so the data is older.

Who ran it

KlientBoost ran this test for a care services lead-gen client and published the results (KlientBoost blog). The numbers are theirs; the summary and commentary on this page are ours.

Read the original case study on KlientBoost →

How to run this test on your site

Hypothesis
If our subheadline says something is ready and waiting for the visitor, then more will move through each form step because it creates a reason to act now.
Primary metric
Completion rate across both form steps
Guardrails
  • Lead quality
  • Step-1 start rate
  • Unsubscribe or complaint rate
Who should test it
Lead-gen businesses with multi-step forms, such as care, insurance or home services, where visitors have a real need to act soon. Avoid false urgency, which can hurt trust and lead quality.

Questions

Does urgency in a subheadline work for lead-gen?

It can, when the urgency is real and fits the visitor's need.

In this test, an urgent subheadline beat the original on a care services form.

What is the risk of urgency copy?

Fake or pushy urgency can feel manipulative and lower trust.

Keep it honest and tied to what the visitor actually gets.

Should I measure each step of a multi-step form?

Yes. Tracking each step shows where people drop off and whether a change helps the whole flow, not just the first screen.

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