Pain-relief vs longevity angle on dog supplement advertorial: +28% CTR

WinnerLanding page · 2026-01-14

Changing a dog supplement advertorial from a longevity angle to a pain-relief angle raised click-through to the product page by 28.7%. Oliver Kenyon ran this as one of five advertorial variations, each built around a different emotional angle. The product stayed the same; only the framing changed.

+28% CTR
  • Click-through rate to the product page: +28.7%. More readers moved from the advertorial to the PDP.
  • Monthly revenue of $116,772 was reported for the winner. The post does not say how much of that was extra revenue versus the control.
  • Sales were said to increase, but no conversion rate or sample size was shared.

The change

Control (A)
Boost your dog's longevityREPLACED
Posted on date, author
Happy owner and dogREPLACED
Vitality benefits copyREPLACED
benefits
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Variant (B)
Relieve your dog's painNEW
Posted on date, author
Owner comforting dogNEW
Joint pain relief copyNEW
benefits
Shop now

Same advertorial layout, with the angle switched from longevity to pain relief.

Simplified mockup drawn by LiftArchive from the shared screenshots.

Control

The advertorial headline promised to boost the dog's longevity. It showed a happy owner hugging a healthy dog and described a vitality supplement for heart health, immunity and joints.

Variant

The headline promised to relieve the dog's pain. It showed a worried owner comforting their dog and described the product as easing joint pain and inflammation.

Why it likely won

Our reading of the result, not the practitioner's claim.

Caveats: Sample size, duration and statistical confidence were not shared. The headline metric is click-through to the product page, not purchases.

Who ran it

Oliver Kenyon (@oliverkenyon) shared this test on X. The numbers and screenshots are theirs.

How to run this test on your store

Hypothesis
If we lead our advertorial with the problem our product solves today instead of a long-term benefit, then click-through to the product page will rise because the need feels more urgent.
Primary metric
Conversion rate from advertorial visit to purchase
Guardrails
  • Click-through rate to PDP
  • Refund rate
  • Average order value
Who should test it
Brands using presell pages or advertorials for supplements or health products with several possible benefits. It may not help if your product has one obvious use already.

Questions

Which ad angle works better for pet supplements?

In this test, a pain-relief angle beat a longevity angle by 28.7% in click-through to the product page. Results may differ by product and audience.

How many angles should I test on an advertorial?

Oliver Kenyon tested five versions here, each with a different emotional angle. This pairing was the one shared as a winner.

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