Rewrite feature specs as benefits

Idea byKasper DolkMaison Commerce

Commentary byLiftArchiveOur analysis, not theirs

Connect features to benefits instead of plain specs, e.g. '20MP Camera' to 'Capture memories with the razor-sharp 20MP camera'.

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